Hi There Yile, I love watching your presentations. I always find them very fascinating and different from others. The only comments I would make is maybe change up the background setting so that it looks more professional and also it is a little monotoned. Other than that, I do really think you had key points and a strong speech. Keep up the great work! -Mayson
Hi Yile, Great pitch! After watching all three of your elevator pitches, this one is the best by far. I really enjoyed watching you become more confident and more comfortable in front of the camera. Each pitch came easier to me than the one before and I see it look easier for you as well. Overall, I really enjoyed your pitch.
Hi There Yile,
ReplyDeleteI love watching your presentations. I always find them very fascinating and different from others. The only comments I would make is maybe change up the background setting so that it looks more professional and also it is a little monotoned. Other than that, I do really think you had key points and a strong speech. Keep up the great work! -Mayson
Hi Yile,
ReplyDeleteGreat pitch! After watching all three of your elevator pitches, this one is the best by far. I really enjoyed watching you become more confident and more comfortable in front of the camera. Each pitch came easier to me than the one before and I see it look easier for you as well. Overall, I really enjoyed your pitch.